Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and Miss Pownall is my teacher. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 11 September 2020
Tuesday, 1 September 2020
Persuasive letter
Ocea Little-Harris, Miss Pownall,
Room 2, Room 2,
NBC. NBC.
Dear Miss Pownall,
I strongly believe that we should have Charlie in the classroom because we could take walks with Charlie outside. He could give me comfort and cuddle me. He is so adorable.
Firstly, we could take walks outside. It would be good cause we could play with him. He could play hide and seek, fetch and manhunt. It is good for us to have fresh air.
Secondly, He can comfort me when I am sad. He can sit next to me and I can give him cuddles. He would be happy to see me and he would like me to pat him.
Finally, Charlie is adorable. Charlie is so cute because I saw a picture of him and I really wanted to cuddle with him. He is so cute and I read online that if I pat him 5 times my stress levels will go down. The other Charlie in room 4 is so cute and I think she will be friends. with Miss Pownall’s Charlie.
That's why
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