The mirror

we are learning to write a narrative, in a narrative you need to write a story so that make sense. My next step is to check my writing so it can make sense.

The mirror!

The mirror there was a creepy house. with a creepy mirror inside. And when mayah and me were going inside. We were scared mayah and I were going into the bathroom. And we did opened the door. And we saw a mirror in The bathroom. mayah and me mayah touched the mirror. and we saw us die in the mirror and screamed like ahhh and mayah was scared too. I got captured by a burglar and Mayah tried to find me. When I got captured. Mayah found me and we got flushed down the door and me and mayah got captured too. And no one is going to save us and you won't help us then save us and please save us. I tried to escape it was too hard. And if you find us and we will die soon and we will never be free and someone found us and helped us. And we don't die and you get something to just like us. And be careful and don't get captured be safe and don't do it. And the mirror was there and the stairs lead us to the mirror and it was gone when we turned and it was gone and there was a dog there. And we went to the roof somehow and if you jump you will go up the roof and you will live and live for your death ok because you need to be careful and do it careful please be careful. How mayah finds me: mayah tried to find me and found me in a red room it was a scary room in the red room and mayah got me and we fled the house. We went back to our house. And mayah went to her house. And when she was there i went to sleep and I don't know that mayah was going to sleep. And maybe she is going to sleep but I text her. And she said ( i'm not going to sleep ) mayah said. And i said ( well i am going to sleep ) that what i said. And you said mayah? ( I went to sleep ) I said ( ok ) bye mayah see you later see you later too. And that was the end of my setines?